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4 fun ways to develop characters for a short story

Every story needs a star. From famous footballers to pet hamsters to superheroes, unforgettable characters make stories come to life. These four fun activities will help any aspiring author dream up some page-turning protagonists.

Make sure you remind your child to submit their finished story to this year’s BBC 500 Words short story competition by 22 February 2018.

1. Instant impressions

Writers can use adjectives to create an instant picture in a reader’s mind. With your child, make a list of weird and wonderful adjectives such as ‘flashy’, ‘wheedling’ and ‘chinless’. Pick three to describe your story’s hero (they don’t all have to be positive!). See if your child can write a descriptive paragraph about their character using those three words. Then, why not do the same thing with the villain of the story?

2. Get the profile

Asking questions about the characters in a story can give writers the answers they need to bring them to life. Challenge your child to think about what a character is like and why they act the way they do. This can often help with plot ideas too! Here are some ideas of the kind of questions you could ask:


  • What is your character’s name?
  • What does your character look like?
  • Does your character speak or make any sounds?
  • What interests or pet hates does your character have?
  • Does your character have a hobby? What do they do?
  • Where does your character live?
  • Does your character have a family?

Author Top Tip:
When you come up with story characters, keep thinking about them while you go about your daily life… What would they say in this situation? What would they eat for lunch? What would they do to have fun? You get to know them much better and it makes them more believable.

Clare Elsom


3. The game of the name

Unforgettable characters need a memorable name. Think about famous character names from fiction (like Lord Voldemort, Zaphod Beeblebrox, or Ebenezer Scrooge) and ask your child to guess what type of story they are from. For example, would you expect to find a character called Eowyn Broadsword in a love story or a fantasy tale? Is this the kind of name you would give to a heroine or villain? Mindmap some ideas for character names that fit your child’s story.

4. Draw your character

This activity idea comes from author Sarah McIntyre: ‘Draw your character first! Sometimes it’s easier to write a story when you have a good sense of what your character looks like: the clothes they wear (or if it’s a beast, maybe fur, or scales, or feathers), and what their body language says about their personality. You can also draw the world around them: do they live in a city, a rainforest, at the bottom of a well, under a bowling alley, on the moon?’

Author Top Tip:
Try to make your characters real; try to make them come alive on the page; try to make them people we’d like to know more about. Let us know what makes them tick.

Charlie Higson


Now that your child has a set of interesting and unique characters, all that remains is to create a story around them. What crazy adventures and wild exploits will they find themselves in?

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From aardvark to zozimus, a dictionary of real and invented words used by the world’s best storyteller. With real citations from Roald Dahl’s children’s books and illustrations by Quentin Blake, this dictionary is engaging, accessible, and will inspire and encourage young writers and readers.

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